Building a Better 2nd Draft - Your Opening Scenes and First Act

How's the beginning of your story looking? Does it need some structure? How about a boost? Would it help you to know what should be there so you can make it better?

In this thrilling sorta technical episode of Building A Better Second Draft, I walk you right through your first five scenes (and by extension all the way through your first act), one scene at a time.

I think you're going to like this one.