2021.10.31 – 0304 – Grammar Glue Part 2

or – and and or are often two sides of the same coin. “And” is often giving additional information, whereas “or” usually suggests options or alternatives are available.


In a simple ‘either/or’ phrase, the “or” is often subdued, to allow the basic options either side to be coloured. “You can have chicken or fish”.


But in a more complicated sentence, when there are two sets of options compared with two more you may want to highlight the “or” to be a ‘pivot point’ in the options. Remember our holidaying friends who are working out where to go? “So if you want to go to the museum now I will meet you there, or come with me to the shop and we will go to the museum together”.


of - “Some of the oil refineries in the Gulf have shut down ahead of the arrival of the hurricane.” [1]

 

Hopefully, with what you know so far, you lifted “oil refineries”, “Gulf”, “shut down”, and “hurricane”.

 

Now read this:

 

“Emergency services in southern American states are bracing themselves for winds of up to 80 miles an hour, as Hurricane Pete heads their way. Ships in the Gulf of Mexico are in particular danger. Some of the oil refineries in the Gulf have shut down ahead of the arrival of the hurricane.”

 

All I’ve done is added an extra two sentences to the start of the report, so some of what you previously highlighted as new information may now be old information, and so your intonation will change. If you lifted “Oil refineries”, “shut down” and “arrival”, but didn’t stress “hurricane” or “Gulf” (old information), well done.

 

Some people though will lift other ‘glue’ words instead, such as “in” and “of” as in “Some of the oil refineries in the Gulf have shut down ahead of the arrival of the hurricane”.  The thinking seems to be ‘I’ve talked about the hurricane and the Gulf, so I cannot stress those words again. I know, I’ll stress the ‘in’ and the ‘of’!’

 

And sorry to say, after a while, the thought process is no longer necessary, because stressing prepositions becomes second nature. This is wrong.


[1] Adapted from https://www.thetimes.co.uk/article/here-is-the-news-im-stressed-out-hk9sccfdgsb and https://www.thetimes.co.uk/article/are-bbc-newsreaders-guilty-of-mispronunciation-xn3n8d0r8jj


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