2021.10.12 – 0285 – 2 - Un-colour Old Information

Unimportant or old information (that is, detail which is already known or presumed to be known), can be ‘thrown away’ in your delivery and does not need to be highlighted. It can stay on your level tone or subdued.

 

 “The crash was between two cars. The blue car hit the red car.” We just saw how you would naturally slightly highlight “crash” and “two cars” in the first sentence but would you colour the word “car” in the second? Go ahead and you will hear how wrong it sounds. That’s because we already know the accident involved cars (rather than trucks, coaches, taxis or motorbikes) – it’s old information. The new detail is the colour of the cars – so that’s what we highlight.

 

“Mary had a little lamb. The lamb’s name was Larry” - we lifted “Mary”, “lamb” and “Larry” because they are names or new information, but subdue the second reference to the lamb, because that’s old information., but lift its name.

 

Of course, you might say, that’s not how we would write a sentence – with a repeated word. And you’re right, you’d probably naturally speak by replacing the subsequent use of “car” or “lamb” with a pronoun. “The blue one hit the red one” and “its name was Larry”.

 

But that doesn’t change the ‘rule’: whether it’s known information through a repeated word, or a substitute for that word, you still don’t highlight its subsequent appearances.[1]

 

Let’s look at these two sentences again:

“The crash was between two cars. The blue one hit the red one”

“Mary had a little lamb. It was called Larry.”

 

And actually, you’ll see that even though we replaced the repetitive words with pronouns, we didn’t even need to do that. Much of the content of the second sentences is so throwaway and insignificant, we could have just, as we may have done in a conversation, just not said most of it:

 

“The crash was between two cars. The blue hit the red.”

“Mary had a little lamb: Larry.”

 

So old information, such as a repeated noun is not lifted, even if it is a replaced with a pronoun. And many times, the pronouns are so unnecessary anyway, we can remove them from the sentence as well.


[1] Although there may be a few exemptions to this as we will see later.



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