2021.06.29-0180 – ‘Marking Up A Script’ Tips

Making annotations on your page will help you communicate your message.


Normal punctuation will only get you so far, commas giving a basic idea of phrases within a sentence, and full stops showing you the end of a complete thought. To help you interpret copy to be read aloud, particularly for broadcast and particularly to make it sound ‘conversational’[1] then you need to get out your pen and mark up some additional punctuation.

 

Marking up a script will remind you how to ‘act’ naturally, in an artificial construct – in other words how to sound as though you are ad-libbing conversationally, when actually reading pre-considered, written words. Then later we will look at when and how to ‘ignore’ the guidelines, to sound more natural. But we have to know what the ‘rules’ are first.


You will use a system of symbols on your script[2], additional punctuation if you like, to show you how it should be read. There are no standard squiggles, you can develop your own, but it’s important to keep them simple and be consistent with how you use them so they aid rather than lead to on-air errors.[3]

At first, marking up scripts will perhaps seem time-wasting tedium. But you’ll soon change that ‘first thought’ to ‘second nature’ and realise that doing it helps you become a better broadcaster-performer.

 

But remember, making these marks are only a guide. You may read a script slightly differently from another person because you have brought your own experience and interpretation to it – and that’s why you have been hired.

 

If you are working on a paper copy of a script, mark it with a pencil. Then if you decide to make a change, it’s easy to erase one mark and put it somewhere else in the copy. But do consider saving the planet and using an online ‘marker-upper’ instead, such as https://scriptation.com/ or these: https://clickup.com/blog/annotation-software/


[1] There’s a full section on ‘conversationality’ that is, reading a script with the ‘attitude’ of it being adlibbed, later in the book.

[2] Of course, marking scripts can’t be done when you are reading from a screen!

[3] You may want to use a coloured pen when marking a script, to better see your directions. This is particularly useful for those working in video with an autocue as well as notes, or with a series of bullet points, as you can more quickly see where you are in a script when you take a glance at them.


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